A few hopes lost in the midnight mist
No dreams to see, no thoughts alive
Those brackish drops spilling down the face
The beginning of smiles distant, far-off;
A glimmer of courage
In pursuit of a sign,
This gentle heart prays
Oh! Please let me shine.
Barefooted steps on the sand of life
Leaving the symbols of losses, of twinge
Pushing hard in the depths of despair
No way to come over; rise strong.
With a nameless fear
My senses pine;
An edgy heart prays
Please let me shine.
Wavering hands and a suffering soul
Scars that smolder; unhealed wounds
A will to climb up each time I fall
The faith that brightens moments so dim,
I stand to start over
In the midst of this time
A belief, a desire
I know I would shine.
My Sentiments, My Expressions 
I like this! I feel like I can relate. Good flow to it, something which I canr eally appreciate. Well done!
Thank you so much! You can read more of my poems and write-ups on my two blogs. I’d be glad. And I enjoy your writing…on the path of reading more of it 😉
This is good stuff. There’s something about it that draws it to me, but I can’t say what exactly. Good job. 🙂
Thank you so much for reading and connecting with it! It really does mean a lot…glad you stopped by!
I love it!
Thank you so much for stopping by and appreciating this piece 🙂
Beautiful , really enjoyed reading it.
Thank you for reading and following my blogs. It means a lot 🙂